The inclining development of technology leads to the easiness of mobility in fulfilling human's daily needs, including the change of traditional shopping into online shopping. Regardless of the preference of people, I believe that there are pluses and minuses in buying stuff in the online shop.
First of all, the efficiency of time and energy and the accessibility of buying goods in far places become the two most obvious reasons for people in choosing online shopping. Nowadays, people, especially those living in a big city, get busier at work and get tired of going to some places due to the inclining traffic jam. By online shopping, people can consider to buy something while they are working, thereby increasing the tendency of online shopping. Moreover, people living in countryside and having more difficulties in accessing mall and department store, are able to explore all items from various regions without taking more energy and time in visiting the real store.
However, nonconformity between the picture and the real things becomes the most worried thing for people in buying online. Oftentimes, in displaying stuff by a picture, the seller will try to edit the picture to interest their customers to buy. Even, they will fake the stuff they sell with the displayed ones to get more economical benefits. For example, when buying a dress, what comes to their house can be smaller size or worse quality than what they look at the display. This lead to a fraud and frequently make people disappointed due to the unsuitable fact with their expectation.
In overview, I believe that online shopping gives more benefits for those with the busy life. Nevertheless, the increasing demand of online shop cause the rising fake online shop. Therefore, people have to be smart and think wisely before deciding to buy something expensive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider buying'.
Suggestion: consider buying
...fic jam. By online shopping, people can consider to buy something while they are working, there...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ell with the displayed ones to get more economical benefits. For example, when buying a d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12913907285 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65984743669 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8929090029 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.642857143 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165446224779 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631505712353 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683399798089 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115244264652 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547562907794 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.