The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter
punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern day, an opinion of imposing stricter punishments on illegal Commuters is the only measure to ensure road safety. Although a heavy fine on driving offenses seems to be effective, there are numerous methods, which are extremely feasible
On the one hand, it is undeniable that stricter punishments are necessary. Firstly, governments need to consider motoring offenses as a kind of crime in order to impose heavy fines. For example, there is a wide range of such non-custody sentences as driving bans which authorities give to offenses and it may act as a barrier to make them think twice before breaking the rules. Secondly, if those commuters commit serious crime as driving while intoxicated or accidentally causing death, they have to serve a prison sentence. This is because of ensuring the safety of residents.
On the other hand, there is a wide range of additional measures that seem to be feasible to combat road accidents and careless drivers. In fact, by installing speed cameras, numerous commuters are more likely to aware of the limitation of speed. Since including such particular places as hospitals and shool extremely needs safe assurance for patients and young children when crossing the road. In addition, another solution is that local officials are able to allocate their budgets to construct more traffic calming. This is because it would bring out broad-based benefits, either traffic calming may act as a tool against the over-speed drivers or one helps to an aesthetic upgrading in residential areas.
In conclusion, heavy punishments are essential to deal with driving offenses, however, there is a wide range of feasible measures that are able to combine with the former methods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17562724014 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77622571971 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4564698074 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5833333333 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149337110897 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050526715174 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463950945494 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961364608752 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562569122801 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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