The increase in vehicular numbers on road has become a menace nowadays as it is paving a way for more and more accidents. It is argued that the most significant way to make roads more safer to drive on, is to impose more stringent rules and punishments. In my opinion, though it can help us on a short term basis but for long term results we have to introduce some additional steps in form of education and awareness.
Policy makers believe that these harsher penalities in form of huge fines/and even imprisonment will help to improve the road safety, by creating fear in drivers' mind to check his erratic driving behaviour. This negative reinforcement technique is not going to check this problem permanently as these drivers will tend to obey traffic rules only when they are being watched or they are traversing roads having speed trekkers.
On the other hand, to improve the safety on roads, we should introduce chapter on traffic rules at the primary and secondary level of education curriculum to make naive minds more aware and conscious about this. This will in return incultivate these good points in them and when these children will start driving, they will be a much more responsible drivers. Secondly, awareness programme or courses should be conducted at different levels such as public gathering, official meetings or offices and at recreation centres. These methods will lead to permanent positive reinforcement in one's behaviour
In conclusion, penalising the drivers by harsher punishments and hefty fines for their conduct of disobeying the traffic rules can lead to short term benefits but for long lasting results people has to be educated at amateur level and road safety awareness programme should be adopted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
... the most significant way to make roads more safer to drive on, is to impose more stringen...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... drivers will tend to obey traffic rules only when they are being watched or they...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hildren will start driving, they will be a much more responsible drivers. Secondl...
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Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... to permanent positive reinforcement in ones behaviour In conclusion, penalising...
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Line 5, column 602, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...positive reinforcement in ones behaviour In conclusion, penalising the drivers by...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nts and hefty fines for their conduct of disobeying the traffic rules can lead to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08013937282 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6886765847 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4752824194 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.0 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8888888889 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105084489277 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468288916147 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031862054658 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065469798884 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018040411307 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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