Home is the basic necessity of human beings. More and more people around world are investing their hard earned money in purchasing their own residential area than to opt for living in rented accommodation. In my opinion this is s pragmatic development and in this essay we will discuss the two main reasons for the same which are mainly better loan facilities leading to long term economical gains and social stability.
Citizens of most of the countries are dwelling their own homes because of better economic policies nowadays. They can procure a loan from banks after submitting their financial status. For instance, one of my friend who had been living in a rented accommodation for last 14 years has now purchased his dream home through a bank by procuring a loan. Now, after paying installments for 10 years he will be the owner of his home and afterwards he is not supposed to pay anyone for his living expense. This in future will lead to his better economical condition too.
Secondly, for social and family stability people tend to invest their savings in making their own property. People who lives in a house on tariff have to shift their home on regular basis after the expiry of their rent deed. This in returns lead to disenchantment, social instability nd affects family members. For example, sometimes children has to change their schools frequently due to change in their location. So denizens prefer to own their home to avoid creating unwanted trouble to their family.
In conclusion, I reckon this to be a positive development as it imparts more stability to family members and better future economical condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95652173913 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69319663756 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9052783773 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7142857143 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162018448893 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586271547375 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304468413552 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103489378424 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197490183905 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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