The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this modern world the rising numbers of vehicles is a major concern around the world. It is argued that reducing the requirements of travel to workstations, schools, or shopping malls may act as a viable solution. This essay agrees full extent that it will be a positive approach as the technological advancement has invented ways to practice this approach as well as a good precedent of this approach was seen during covid-19 outbreak.
Nowadays modern invention has changed every aspect of our lives. Moreover, the invention of various equipments such as smartphones, laptop, and a personal computer to assist us to communicate through the internet from anywhere of the world. Hence, people can access meeting and classes from home using online platforms while shopping through online retails are also gaining popularity. To cite an instance, last year due to the shortage of electricity all the educational institute along with offices were made online so that people can work or take part in classes from home. These approaches result in decreased traffics significantly in 2020.
On the other hand, declining the needs of travel will lower the traffics as people will be busy at home in their work. Furthermore, purchasing platforms on the internet is already created a dip in offline shopping practices. As a result, major global concerns such as air pollution, traffic jam, and global warming will decrease. During Covid 19 pandemic people tend to attend their daily work through online platforms. Almost a great proportion of companies and educational institutions had shown that they are well equipped to switch their work online. Thus, it created a good precedent.
To summarize, implementing home office and classes along with promoting online shops will greatly reduce the volume of on-road vehicles. As modern technology allows us to make these changes possible and a great exercise of this phenomenon was seen during Covid 19 pandemic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24840764331 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77622262533 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589171974522 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0078118508 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154131046583 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456354327914 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392484505736 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086420813088 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260486333969 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.