The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
Currently, It has been stated that the level of juvenile delinquency is increasing. The best way to overcome this issue is to teach better parenting for parents. I personally agree with this statement which will be elucidated below.
On the one hand, it is a factual fact that school also has role to shape youngsters’ behaviour especially when they should be prepared to socialize in real life. The better moral education should be provided to them in order students obey unwritten laws running in society in terms of how they behave to others. For example, there are numerous moral education taught in school for youngsters in order that they are accepted in society such as helping others and treating older people well. However, school could not control their pupils every time. This is because When the students are out of school, they could not be fully controlled. Hence, the crime caused by youngsters probably happens. Taken as example, there are few cases after school that students often commit brawl to others so that it causes serious damage received by them.
On the other hand, the parents have more time spent with their children. They know what activity is done by children so It is preferred for parents to have well-taught good parenting method which they should impose to their kids. This merely teaches the young to understand which one they are allowed to do such as how they respond to and solve the problem. In addition, parents also have full control on their kids. They should be the first one to teach their kids. Furthermore, parents should have better knowledge to be delivered to kids. This is because sometimes children have unstable emotion so that the youngsters show the tendency of disobedience. Thus, The children performed bad reaction, if parents would not have good communication skills to speak with them.
In conclusion, it seems to me that why parents should be taught better parenting methods to be teacher for their kids is because they are always on the young’s side and have strong control on them to avoid youngster-committed crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98285714286 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59619187367 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6273648934 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7894736842 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174757241165 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602797171683 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621098059905 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120082137038 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615723899445 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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