In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford the, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some people miss the education because of the lack of money. Many believe that access to educational opportunity is the right and have to be available for everyone. I totally agree with this issue.
A good reason is that the number of experts is going up so many of obstacles indirectly have solved. Everybody has a new thought and idea so this is a good option for society. If the level of thought is going up, the number of ways to solve them is more. So that the life will be more easier.
Another point is that while one could do some goods for their societies and be helpful, the rate of self- confidence grow up and depression comes down. When people can study freely, maybe most of them could have better lifestyle , do not have to do wrongly or not accept mistake.
Finally, people are happier ; the life expectancy is changed better. Because having a good career helps people to improve the characters. Also having high education not only boost their self-esteem but live up to societies’ expectations.
In conclusion, having free education is the right and help to improve life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e number of ways to solve them is more. So that the life will be more easier. Another ...
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Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... them is more. So that the life will be more easier. Another point is that while one could...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...most of them could have better lifestyle , do not have to do wrongly or not accept...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the life expectancy is changed better. Because having a good career helps people to im...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...helps people to improve the characters. Also having high education not only boost th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 192.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69270833333 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5327119082 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1499813651 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3076923077 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152640648687 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566391827794 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324117057576 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878906071559 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366535396992 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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