In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford the, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Universities should look forward to equally accepting students regardless of their gender status. To my mind , I strongly agree that students must be given identical opportunity to choose the proper college major as they wish to.
Based on gender gap, universities prohibit a large proportion of students from attending their prefarable field of study. A good reason to eliminate gender disparity in study is to provide students the same rights , whether they are men or women . This holds true especially for women . Although there has been a significant boost in girls' enrollment in universities , still, they are more likely than men to recieve the sort of education they are interested in.
The next point is that the society has lablelled varoius feilds according to gender . As an example , sports is considered to be the domain of men , contrary to fashion designing which is regarded as a feminine course of study . Moreover a female flying high in the men's domain is still encouraged while when men scale new heights in a female-dominated field , become the subject of some jeering among people. physical features are not a means of determining someone's gifts and abilities because both men and women are capable of expressing their talents. The mentallity status of men and women does not does not have anything in common with biological characteristics of them. Skill memory appears to function the same in male and female brains.
Another worthy note to mention is that this descrimination brings about trauma for a majority of students as they won't be able to be adapted to the type of job which has been imposed upon them. Therefore, due to the lack of interest, they are not eager to take heavy responsibilities leading to the reduction of job quality at workplace. Similarly, since they will probably tend to ignore their tasks as much as they can, they won't make any progress and won't prove to be practical as a part of the society.
Finally , women and men are classified into categories to obey streotyped beliefs and behaviors in order to be fit in society standards . The more they follow the sexist attitude, the more they get credit and are valued . As a result, sexism will be always being transferred generation to generation . For instance , men keep taking assumption to take science-related subjects such as mathematics, information technology and politics unlike women who hold the idea that they had better select art, language and humanities.
In conclusion, equal rights are a must for both men and women so that they will improve their capabilities and reach the highest level of success to benefit the society with the help of their area of study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, moreover, similarly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99103139013 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83907419277 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567264573991 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2720583432 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.3 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138067659349 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433579387113 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398114997243 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079564471051 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508783352996 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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