in order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
there are many universities in the world that students have to pay tuituion fees meanwhile some students do not have this pay money for it . so, some people believed there should be offer for economy of weaker student. I agree that education should be free.
Firstly; ministry of education system should have a big plan for teaching and upbrining of all ages . the experts education have program education free from primary school to college , because the parents their have to 2 shift works and pay tax and other cost living. So , the costs relate to education is from tax in the society .
The government needs to strong students for counting industrials , economy , medical staff , and all useful jobs .
Secondly: education free can help an increase development country . on the other hand , the parents relieve stress and let off steam after back braking day because they don’t have tried for pay tuition schools .
Sometimes some students due to do not have money , they can not continu education . so , they go to side gang a way.
Thirdly: the teachers will have more wage and don’t need to have private student . the students will have free time and they can learn many skills in school and their promotion in society . education system can check to trend of students progress .
In conclusion: I think that one of the best plan in country for education free system can help to promote flat county .
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- Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages therefore it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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- Some people today believe that the world s increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world s economy 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89075630252 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43681683282 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554621848739 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9154615193 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8666666667 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336455430411 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13066433364 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791712645575 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168448465488 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109419727922 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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