Over polpulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one otlr two serious ones and suggest ways that government and individual can tackle this problem.
Last few decade population in the major cities is increasing dramatically and along with that lot of problems also hiking up. This essay will first suggest that problems associated with crowdedness in the urban area are sociological and environmental problems, and then submit the viable solution by the help of government and individual to settle this by reduction of unemployment and traffic control.
Firstly, severe problems are stemmed from the growing number of population in the cities. Mainly peoples' are suffering problem related to unemployment, which may lead to serious sociological problems namely crime, robbery, extortion and so on. Moreover, increasing price due to inflation makes people to do such criminal activities for their daily living. For instance, recent studies reveal that many anti-social groups are grown up in between the young jobless adults, and most of the crimes are leading by them. Secondly, pollution is the other major problem occurred by the overpopulation. Rising usage of fossil fuels makes exhaust emission and also contributes to the global warming.
However, we can quell the issues by dealing with the initiative of government and Manpower. Law enforcing organization should be empowered by more Manpower and necessary funds so that they can work according to the necessity. Include qualified human-resource managements to lead such organization. Furthermore, strict lows for traffic violence, and vehicle usage. Apply rules should be imposed to own private vehicle to reduce traffic congestion and public transportation facilities should enhance as well. For instance, metro trains are widely used transport service in the major cities like Dubai.
To conclude, although growing population by urbanization is the major issue, surveillance to the joblessness, and related criminal activities would decline the anti-social affairs. Likewise, adequate preservatives of traffic rules and regulations can shrink the environmental pollutions also. These factors can be predicted by a joint attempts of government and individual.
- Some people think personal happiness is directly related to economic success while others believe this depends on other factors Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 78
- Map of a City in 1950 67
- The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Shopping habits depend more on your age group than anything else To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some people believe bicycle have a lot of advantages while others believe bicycle have more disadvantages Discuss both views and give your opinion 63
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'likewise', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276967930029 0.247107183377 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.151603498542 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.116618075802 0.0946595960268 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0495626822157 0.0501214627716 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0116618075802 0.0437548338989 27% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.107871720117 0.122226691241 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0583090379009 0.0403226058552 145% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06571750329 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0349854227405 0.0326793684256 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00583090379009 0.00163938923432 356% => OK
Determiners: 0.069970845481 0.0861772015684 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0291545189504 0.021408717616 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00291545189504 0.011925033212 24% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2093.0 1933.35771543 108% => OK
No of words: 309.0 316.048096192 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.77346278317 6.12580529183 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.472491909385 0.374742101984 126% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.36569579288 0.28420135186 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.26213592233 0.203846283523 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.200647249191 0.137316102897 146% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06571750329 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.037074148 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624595469256 0.56093040696 111% => OK
Word variations: 72.6709568773 60.7387585426 120% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1764705882 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6414904365 49.517814964 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.117647059 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7743622355 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.941176470588 0.814263465372 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 54.7460498763 49.1944974215 111% => OK
Elegance: 2.08219178082 1.69124875643 123% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254071118461 0.332605444948 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0875346631601 0.102741220458 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0590295823453 0.0668466124924 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474729141397 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148592452812 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987423115875 0.134430193775 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693245000964 0.0742795772207 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365654895657 0.324371583561 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0380591480881 0.0638462369009 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191424019949 0.228012699653 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529834756432 0.058150111329 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.5751503006 311% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.