A huge number of people are migrating to urban areas for several reasons. This led to overcrowding of urban areas and cause innumerable problems.
Admittedly, day by day population of urban areas is increasing drastically. This cause detrimental effects socially as well as environmentally. Firstly, increase number of people means increases number of houses and to build those houses many trees are being cut and land are used. Deforestation is the primary cause of natural disaster like soil erosion and landslides.Adittionally, atmosphere is getting more polluted each day due to industrialisation and clearing trees even worsen the situations. Secondly, there are more cases of crime in the city because of overpopulation. Everyone is not getting job as per the expenditure needed to stay in the city as living in the city is costly. That’s why people do get engaged in illegal work where they can earn more money as compared to normal job.
However, these problems can be tackled by efforts from both government and individual. From government side more facilities namely hospital, industry and school should be provided to people in rural areas so that they needn’t to go to city for better facilities. If the problem persists for large extent then government should introduce one child policies like China government did to reduce number of population in China. Individual also have self responsibility to protect their deteriorating environment and should be concerned while using the resources be it land, electricity and water. If they use these resources excessively, their future generation will face a scarcity of everything and will be in mesirable condition.
In conclusion, although overpopulation is the unmanageable problem, people have to come up with alternative solutions to solve problems concerning with overpopulation as no child policies is not applicable. The continuous effort form government as well as individual is necessary to solve the problem caused by overpopulation.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 73
- The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 61
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Look at the figures for the proportion of people involved in agriculture as shown in the pie chart 79
- some countries have come to rely on tourism as their major source of income However many people believe that the problems caused by tourism are more serious than those it has solved Discuss both views and give examples 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Adittionally
...saster like soil erosion and landslides.Adittionally, atmosphere is getting more polluted ea...
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Message: Did you mean 'there are more cases'?
Suggestion: there are more cases
...s even worsen the situations. Secondly, there is more cases of crime in the city because of overpop...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...urces be it land, electricity and water.If they use these resources excessively, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as for, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47266881029 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38859158205 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588424437299 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3688682039 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.466666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163919630427 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558427389468 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630539098315 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10477104402 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642485254128 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.