Overpopulation in urban areas has lead to numerous problems . Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Many issues have been arising in cities due to people's migration toward cities. Air pollution and traffic congestion are the major problems. This essay will discuss the main causes of air pollution and traffic congestion. This essay will also suggest the solutions to these problems, including widening roads and launching reliable public transport.
Air pollution and traffic congestion are ubiquitous in cities as compared to rural areas because people are moving towards urban areas to avail better job opportunities and amenities. Cars, buses, bikes, rickshaws and trucks are excreting dangerous gases and these gases are the primary reasons for surging air pollution. For instance, due to a greater number of industries and companies, most people are getting jobs pertaining to their fields. Consequently, most individuals prefer to use their private vehicles to commute to their destined offices. Therefore, problems such as air pollution and traffic congestion are increasing in urban areas.
On the other hand, Government officials should take necessary steps like ‘widening roads and reliable public transport to eradicate such issues. Introducing comfortable public transport will attract the city populace to use public transport instead of private cars and thus can alleviate the traffic rush. The roads should be widened to adjust most of the different heavy vehicles to avoid traffic congestion. For example, In UK and China, various kinds of transport have been introduced by their government officials to minimize the number of vehicles on the road and problems such as traffic rush, air and noise pollution. To recapitulate, widened roads and reliable public transport can alleviate the problems of air pollution and traffic congestion.
Wrapping it up, the increment of the population in cities, is aggravating dangerous problems. This essay discussed the problems of air pollution and traffic congestion. This essay also suggested the solutions of widened roads and reliable traffic transport to overcome these problems.
- Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees Therefore the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison Do you agree or disagree 84
- Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones Is this a positive development or a negative one 84
- Whether or not a person achieve their aims in life is mostly related to Luck To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Vaccinating children against preventable diseases is not only unnecessary but also dangerous To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Overpopulation in urban areas has lead to numerous problems Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62459546926 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78707109966 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485436893204 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3797060131 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.235294118 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101800007624 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385458676621 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369350218441 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671144739149 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235859924018 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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