Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems
Nowadays, it is a recent issue that the government and citizen are facing the greatest issue of rapidly dense population in residing area. There are several problems along with the feasible solutions in this tropical issue, which I will elucidate more below.
Regarding the problems, poor housings such as slums are continuously growing due to the non-native societies keep populating urban cities. It is apparent that the settlers, who dream to achieve better finance by seeking out job opportunities there, might end up with low and poor living condition. Thus, slum residences are commonly located in city side deteriorating all groups of dwellers. Moreover, the excessively rapid mobilization will adversely affect human body, particularly poor-quality of healthy life, which results from the long-term effect of noxious emission and industrial disposal. In connection with current overpopulated areas, the young children tend to experience not only childhood growth failure, but also the inheritant diseases afflicted by their parents.
Turning to the solutions, the central government should embark on the equity of infrastructure-based economic development in suburb area, especially employment and healthcare. This might assure the society to gain more job opportunities and elevate their economic life in their birth place. Hence, this should overcome the high number of urbanisation in mega cities. In addition, individual empowerment plays a pivotal role to build personal self-reliance. Concerning on skills and abilities, people who sharpen specific skills and gain more experience potentially find alternative livelihoods, as a result, this can guarantee their welfare and prosperity in lifetime.
In conclusion, the problems of overpopulation in many cities are numerous slum areas and poor health condition. Meanwhile, its solutions may be about government's regional program of economic infrastructures and individual's improved abilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89122807018 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20663362898 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687719298246 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.138640657 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.928571429 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114297207166 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379940138634 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483604080263 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822376245193 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584385538119 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.88 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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