Parents are the best teachers. Do you agree or disagree?
Parents, since we were born, they taught us how to walk, speak and give us advises when we have trouble. Our behaviour mostly learned and shaped from parents which means we can be better or worst due to the way they affect on us.
On one hand,parents are supposed to responsible for illustrating their children what should they do in life and become independent. For example, some of adult obsessed by their unfullfil dream job when they were young such as become a doctor. But when they have child, they intrude their dream on children and taught him or her on the way to be a doctor without giving a thought whether their child like it or not. They convince that was for the shake of children’s future and the best for them. If that child deny to parent decision, they would be considered as rebellious and disobey. Gradually, a child depend on their parent decision instead make it by themselves.
On the other hand, in teaching field, some parent may have qualifications but it can’t be said that they can always teach their own children in right way. The more subjects, the more qualifications need to acquire to become a professor. Having said that no parent have enough time to achieve to be expert in all subjects. Moreover, the gap between generation which would make parents confusing to update with modern knowledge.
To sum up, parents play an important role in our life to guide us for betterment. But I belive that children should be sent to school to receive the best education. After that, they will have enough confident and knowledge to give wise decisions by their own to prepair for some day parents wont be there to help them all the time.
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... be better or worst due to the way they affect on us. On one hand,parents are suppose...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, as for, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6813559322 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57018907396 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.595780309 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957474386857 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399740243277 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254172489893 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623307245073 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217061619327 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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