Parents should not allow their children to eat fast food. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons to your answer and provide examples from your experience or knowledge.Write at least 250 words
Unhealthy eating habits have recently become the primary reason for obesity among western countries. It is argued children ought to be forbidden to consume junk food by their mothers and fathers. I totally agree with this statement and believe that fast food is considered to be expensive and harmful.
Firstly, children are going to suffer from health issues caused by fast food intake. This is because this kind of food contains processed genetically modified substances which in their turn do not digest. Therefore, a young organism’s development decelerates due to the fact that they lack essential nutrients which they could otherwise acquire from organic food. For example, the research conducted by Russian Medical University concluded that 20% of the children who were exposed to excessive consumption of junk food developed serious chronic diseases that were highly likely to deteriorate their future life. In other words, if parents want their children to be happy, they should restrict unhealthy food consumption from their children’s lives.
Secondly, the addiction to junk food makes young people spend more and more money for it. The reason for this is that increased salinity of deep-fried meals influence tongue’s receptors. Consequently, other food, even if it is healthier, doesn’t seem to be tasty in that case, so children, who hardly control themselves, add the intake of fast food and its manufacturers wisely use it. For instance, Burger King overstated prices despite a lower cost and other cheaper proposals because of high demand. Thus limitation eating in such delis can save parent’s money.
In conclusion, adults should protect their children from layered, delicious but not organic junk food to avoid some diseases and save money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43321299639 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69337790886 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635379061372 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.827709499 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210619508327 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757636738928 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491686331206 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132302711326 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034626123354 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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