Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays.
What are the reasons for this?
What can be done to solve this problem?
The question regarding school education has always been high debatable in modern world. Today many students meet an impediment in school education. This is because a computerization gradually change interests of young individuals and a solution of this problem is modernization in education system in society.
The main problem of nowadays’s generation is use the facilities all day long. It means that for many different everyday stuff people use a computer or mobile phone and you can not avoid it. Therefore, individuals choose the convenience against old-fashioned principles of life. For example, the New York Times published an article that in the modern family in 2020 it has become fashionable to hire specialists in time-management knowledge and decrease useless hours sitting in front of the computer. In other words, parents take in interest to children’s use the gadgets only for education.
To solve the above-mentioned problem the government ought to change the position about educating students. This is because, the authorities must attract and encourage young individuals and fight with the unwillingness In education. Hence, the advertisement campaign and scholarship can aid to increase the attention to education process. For instance, the research in educate.com wrote that interest to well-paid education programs in 2020 increased in 27% compared programs without payment. Thus, the cabinet must offer students the good conditions for learning.
In conclusion, the integration of computers in individuals’s life happens, especially at students, and the solve this issue is devise the policies for students attraction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 97, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ilities all day long. It means that for many different everyday stuff people use a computer or...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...fe happens, especially at students, and the solve this issue is devise the policies for s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7044534413 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2567270696 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9865471085 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221292852526 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694165731356 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471608346648 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136836619814 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359094334528 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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