As parents, they should be required to attend parenting courses every year to bring up their children well and give them a better environment for growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently, it is undeniable that one of the most crucial responsibilities is perhaps taking good care of their offspring. It is believed that it should be compulsory for all mums and dads to take parenting courses so that they are better prepared for parenthood. Whereas I suppose that such classes are beneficial, I do not agree that they should be mandatory for the following reasons.
There are several advantages of attending parenting courses. Doubtlessly, parenting lectures will broaden parent’s in-depth knowledge about the way to raise children at each stage of development. Thus, parents can savvy their offspring’s demands and take better care of them. Furthermore, when participated in parenting lessons, mums and dads will be well-prepared with basic first aid skills so that they can handle emergency situations from their juveniles more effectively. To illustrate, urgent cases such as high fever or breathing difficulty offer a wide range of soft skills from parents to solve at that time. Therefore, participating in parenting courses is essential for parents to take care of their children.
Although parenting lectures bring some strengths, I do not believe that it should be conscription. Apparently, many parents have financial difficulties which make them work full-time including all nights or the weekends. Therefore, forcing parents to join these courses is not beneficial as it will have effects on their works as well as their lives. Instead, they should be volunteered to make a decision whether they will attend the lectures or not. On account of that, it will bring a comfortable spirit to parents to attend the lessons.
To sum up, parenting lectures bring a lot of benefits to parents namely widen their knowledge or being well equipped for urgent situations. Despite some perks that parenting classes offer, I strongly think that they should be optional rather than compulsory.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, i suppose, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35313531353 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9665102374 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8483564189 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425928566637 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15446146835 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680640732567 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277023582639 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116013218835 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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