In the past important knowledge of culture and history was stored in museum Nowadays information is freely available on internet therefore is no longer need for museum To what extent do you agree or disagree

Museums have been around for centuries, preserving for the generations to come precious information about life in the past. Despite the crucial role these structures play in our society, concerns have recently risen about their utility. In the light of the technological development, some claim that the Internet has basically superseded museums, making them obsolete and useless. Nothing could be more wrong than this statement and this essay will focus on the reasons why museums represent still these day an instrumental tool to preserve memories and educate citizens.

Probably one of the major breakthrough in the history of mankind, the Internet is an incredible source of information: from every corner of the country users can quickly access an infinite database of videos, pictures, tales, stories, and movies. For the first time in their history, humans can access rapidly and for free the whole knowledge collected over the centuries. So why should one waste time and money to visit a boring and lifeless museum at the outskirt of the city? Well, the answer is not easy but let us try to define what a museum does.

A museum is nothing more than a building that stores tangible and intangible heritage of humanity and it is open to the public. So far so good, but the definition itself is not really informative. So why are museums still important? Museums are places where people can learn from the past and educate themselves to avoid to repeat the same errors. Museums are open to all citizens no matter if they are poor or well-off, no matter if they are blind or too old to to use a computer. In most cases, museums offer free entrance for seniors, who can this way enjoy famous painters or admire ancient sculptures. As we can see, museums also have a social role no computer can outdo, since they keep community alive and ease human interactions.

In conclusion, we desperately need museums. On one hand, they are a safe place to conserve our past, traditions, and cultural heritage. On the other one, they are deeply rooted in our society and also in our modern time have an essential role in propagating arts, science, and culture among citizens.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, still, well, in conclusion, in most cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62033183803 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603260869565 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7801821731 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218014189951 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664662768758 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445542769335 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115751044584 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406922416347 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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