In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area.
What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
In recent years, people tend to move to large cities instead of staying in the countryside due to the demand for the high living standard. there are conflicting views toward this growing trend. while it has been taken that living in the rural area brings us many benefits, it is also considered as a disadvantage holding back your future. Thus, this essay is to evaluate the pros and cons of small communities’ life.
To begin with advantages, the rural area could be regarded as the satisfactory option for the need of the mental and physical health. Firstly, the environment here is so much fresh because there are not many factories releasing smoking into the air. while the fast-growing of urban is perceived as a threat to the environment that has caused heavy air pollution, the pure atmosphere in the countryside could help people prevent many illnesses such as lung, respiratory diseases. Secondly, the villages’ neighborhood relationship has close ties with each other because the majority of them are engaged in agriculture who are sincere and honest. Besides, those people do not have too much pressure on the employment competition, the living cost, so they might have the good spiritual condition that keeps away from depression.
On the other hand, poor facilities and infrastructure are found as a common sight of rural areas that leads to many drawbacks. First of all, the hospitals are severely understaffed and lack many high medical equipment that why local people tend to come to the bigger hospitals in the cities to get better treatment. Second of all, the children here could not get the advanced educational environment as those in large communities. For example, the communication skills as speaking in front of a crowd, the city kids could approach throughout extracurricular lessons, whereas these children could not improve in rural.
In conclusion, living in the villages have both advantages and disadvantages based on your demand for your life. If your priorities are substance, the countryside is not your suitable choice and whereas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17210682493 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91813172837 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572700296736 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9145361276 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.2 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168759182679 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493358545069 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050001868774 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998777863808 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043132208928 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.