In the past, most people spend their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of each? Which do you think is better?
It is true that people nowadays tend to alter their current job to one another. Previously, people spent their entire careers working for one company. While this tendency brings with it several negative outcomes, I believe that the benefits are of greater significance.
On the one hand, there are several advantages why people prefer changing their jobs, instead of working for one company for a long time. One advantage is that individuals can gain experience by performing a different job with new responsibilities that require different skills. For example, basic office computer skills are one of the essential skills for people wanting to be an officer. However, if they change their job to an employee working for a customer department, problem-solving skills are indispensable. Moreover, challenging yourself in a new environment with a different role is an efficient way to gain broader knowledge and relationships.
On the other hand, the disadvantages of switching careers are unavoidable. It must be recognized that individuals must learn a whole new job if they want to find a different position in other companies. As a result, when an employee has been comfortably and happily performing in their current position, this alteration requires energy investment, learning, and adjusting. Additionally, many people search for a new job to seek personal satisfaction with salary, insurance, or co-workers. However, every job has different features and requirements; Therefore, if individuals can adapt, they will be eliminated.
Overall, changing the current job to one another should be recommended for every person, especially for young people, who need to experience and discover what career they are best suited for. It is a good way for people to penetrate their strengths and weaknesses.. Therefore, they can develop themselves inclusively.
In conclusion, while it is true that spending their whole lives under the same employment conditions for many people would ensure comfort, I firmly believe that changing jobs is essential for people in their careers, even though it initially has several difficulties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...penetrate their strengths and weaknesses.. Therefore, they can develop themselves ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47112462006 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14749823408 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534954407295 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4456952186 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.882352941 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331822269274 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11735476221 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104691708485 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203723940718 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692750162284 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.