In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued that keeping knowledge online would be more beneficial than preserving it in books. I completely agree with the view as internet is more powerful regarding preservation of data in many ways which will be elaborated below.
When it comes to data storage, internet is more superior to books in terms of its capacity and accessability. First, the amount of information that online platforms can store is by far more than that of its traditional counterpart. Online datas are divided into smaller pieces called bits, and they are optimized in order to be stored with the least amount space. In addition, given the advent of smart telecommunication devices and internet connection, the access to online information become easier than ever. Nowadays, people are able to read news or books on internet platforms with just few clicks. Likewise, utilization of computers and smart devices enables internet users to attain information anywhere they want. More importantly, there are wide range of knowledge available for online readers. Online platforms now can contain more materials in forms of books, news, reasearches thanks to technology development. This allows online readers to have a wide range of choices which are often limited with conventional books in library. Thus, technological advances would encourage the popularity of online data storage.
Nevertheless, there are still occasions when the use books would be more convenient. First, harness of books appears to be simple. This is because people are generally used to reading books in their early age. Furthermore, entry to internet-based activities seem difficult to certain individuals. This is especialy the case for the elderly, who may find it hard to utilize the internet. However, it is easy for people to learn how to use the internet and smart equipment.
In sum, even though storage knowledge in books is not complex, books contain less information due to their physical limitation. By contrast, internet can hold more data and provide people with many quality features.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, regarding, still, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3036809816 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90782175825 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561349693252 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4325090811 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.45 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19071710691 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598750111834 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399637513315 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123615206912 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400231508727 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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