Today news plays an important role in people’s lives and news media are more influential than ever before. Why is it this case? Is it positive or negative?
The role of news and its impacts have become increasingly significant in recent years. Techological breakthoughs is the main drive behind the phenomenon, and I believe that this is a positive development.
Given the advent of smart equipment and the internet, people nowadays are able to access to news sources at anywhere and anytime. For instance, travelers, who have internet connection and a smartphone can check weather news of their destinations before visiting with just a few clicks. If the state-of-the-art instruments are not invented, people may find it difficult to attain such data.
Another factor that contributes to the prevelance of news media today is the social media. These platforms allow individuals to connect to like-minded people, and share the information that may be mutual interests of them. This not only fosters the exchange of information but encourages democracy online, which make them appealing to the users.
Apart from the benefits, there are certain downsides of the ways news is broadcast these days. Some taboo subjects such as violence, sexuality, drugs are rife on news media. If governments do not seize control over the topics, they would have detrimental impacts on young individuals.
In sum, technological advances could be attributable to the significance of news and its effects on the society. I concur with the view that the development brings more good than harm.
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| 2022-10-27 | Charles Le | 88 | view |
| 2022-10-27 | Charles Le | 56 | view |
| 2022-10-27 | Charles Le | 56 | view |
| 2022-08-14 | Uchiha Minh | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ways'' or 'way's'?
Suggestion: ways'; way's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, apart from, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02762262599 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671111111111 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8224430183 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.7692307692 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243972234672 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743837306206 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520986896962 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115583635542 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129326040229 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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