In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is no doubt that the internet become more and more important in human lives, especially it would be the main tool and communication that people can not live without them. And a good deal of essential information, including secret intimate and humans’ knowledge all storage on the Internet. In my point of view, it can bring some drawbacks for the user, but the long term benefit can outstanding these unfavorable.
To begin with, back to the past, the book has been regarded as a huge storehouse of wisdom and there is nothing that can beat it. Return to now, with the improvement of the Internet, most of the things we need can be found in this social networking, and it is far better than those traditional books which are limited in length. This is the reason why there are fewer people read books as in the past because they had the internet take its place. For instance, if you go by car, during the time you wait at the work place, you can surf the internet to take advantage of learning more knowledge or prepare something important carefully, much more convenient because you do not always remember to bring books with you.
However, the more advanced technology is, the more expensive people have to pay. Initially, the blue light of the computer and phone screens you use will damage your eyes, and over a long period, it will cause fatigue, headaches, and vision loss. Particularly, according to a report from Beijing University, up to 40%, more children are nearsighted in this country compared to the same time last year since having to study online during the Covid-19 epidemic. The knowledge on the internet is countless, but there is also false and unverified information, so it should be carefully selected before referencing.
To sum up, though online knowledge can bring some negatives, I believe the pros outweighs the cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, no doubt, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8275862069 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63858985546 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617554858934 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3329951288 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2334452981 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777278008334 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578071144441 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127666923264 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610158753756 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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