In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
A topical issue in modern society is shopping. These days, it is argued that shopping as a leisure activity. To my mind, I think that it is a negative trend.
There are two main reasons why I believe that recreational shopping is not a positive trend. Firstly, the majority of people who shop just for fun are shopaholics. This is because they spend too much time shopping, and hence, unless they go shopping, they will feel unhappy. Secondly, non-essential shopping leads to throw-away society. To elaborate, some women purchase clothes from retail stores, but they dispose of them after using once or twice, and therefore, it absolutely affects the environment and major resources. For example, clothes manufactures have to use the large amount of water to produce and dye like jeans and t-shirts.
A further reason is that people may waste money for non-essential items when they shop. This is because nowadays the power of advertisements makes people want to purchase products immediately, although they cannot need. For instance, several people shop too much through using credit card that contributes to debt with a great deal of money.
In conclusion, shopping as a hobby is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. However, I believe that people can control their mind before shopping to reduce waste in the environment. If people want to enhance the standard of living, they will know how to shop to save money and time, and become smart consumers in the growing era of consumerism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73951824939 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.25110048 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165394350759 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594728899311 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401076367989 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10383817174 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130544050672 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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