People aim to achieve balance between their work and lives. But few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems? How to overcome it?
Nowadays, In this modern era, people are stuck between balancing the work-life activities. They do not give the proper time to their family because they have the pressure of their jobs. Many citizens have targets to achieve a balanced life among these two criteria, But hardly some of the people achieve it.
To begin, The foremost scenario is that both parents have their personal jobs and do not have free time to spend with their children. For example, Recent research concludes that compared to last decade, The divorce rates are higher day by day for this reason. Secondly, Many jobs' working hours are nearly 8 to 10. Therefore, Parents do not have any leisure time to chat with their kids and enjoy with their families too. Furthermore, They blindly chase after the money and have not any kind of tension about their own health or their family.
In contrast, To solve these problems many countries have their norms such as 40 hours a job for a whole week. So, Parents spend time with their family and adolescents too. Moreover, Try to spend at least 6-7 hours with your family. Because, Recently in the university of Harvard, the health and care department published in their article that, Those parents who have their jobs over time and feel pressure and getting depression from their jobs have spent 6-7 hours daily with their family and children. From that, The anxiety level and depression is getting lower majorly. They feel free and enjoy their lives and jobs too.
To conclude, I suggest that, People who have jobs and do not equilibrium their lives with work have to take care of their family first since, money is important, but not greater than their family. That is how some people manage these problems and some are not to give importance to these both categories.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...fe among these two criteria, But hardly some of the people achieve it. To begin, The for...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, for example, in contrast, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22076023384 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496753246753 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0596267695 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212327627206 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785945634616 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678551230467 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164208496228 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867568989571 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...fe among these two criteria, But hardly some of the people achieve it. To begin, The for...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, at least, for example, in contrast, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22076023384 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496753246753 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0596267695 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.75 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212327627206 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785945634616 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678551230467 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164208496228 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867568989571 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.