People has a busy schedule in these days so some people does not have time even to spend with their family members. Everyone desires to keep balance between personal and professional life; whereas, a few people achieve this target. The phenomenon has a number of problems and solutions as well to tackle this issue that I am going to discuss.
On the one hand, many problems are faced by the people when they try to balance their lives and working life. First of all, in this fast paced world no one has time for any other activity than work as they always work hard to get higher standard of living and complete with each other people in the society. What is more, both genders are working now and they work whole day and spend huge of their time at work place and become unable to communicate with even their children. Secondly, some people has to go outside for finding a job, so they live away from the family and could not internet with them face to face which make them homesick and this is main reason of their failure to get their aim. Finally, being greedy for money is not good obviously as now a days people also compete with others due to amount of money and they forget about their relationships that are more valuable than money. Most importantly, in some situations parents have to let their offsprings to live apart from them likewise in hostels and apartments to study over their which create big communication gap.
On the other hand, there are number of measures to solve this problem. Firstly, government should provide better employment opportunities to people so that they do not need to go outside for earning bread and butter and in this way they can get enough time to spend with their family. Apart from this, people should give importance to their relations than money if they have enough money and high living standard then they should not become crazy for money. In addition to this, parents should try to keep in touch with their children for their overall development instead of leaving them alone in the age when they need learn many things from them.
To conclude, although there are some problems in balancing the personal and professional life yet by applying some solutions the issues can be solved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 758, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...eedy for money is not good obviously as now a days people also compete with others due to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, apart from, as to, in addition, first of all, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6835443038 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27227847749 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3679402221 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.142857143 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2142857143 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276988601332 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109755026645 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749676092618 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166767227638 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911448262118 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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