Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Energy plays an important role in the development of countries. With the abundant availability of fossil fuel, many countries are almost exclusively relying on this source. However, in some countries, the use of renewable energy is promoted to reduce pressure on the current main source. From my perspective, the merits outweigh of this approach the drawbacks.
To begin with, using alternative sources of energy will lessen the negative impact of fossil fuels on the environment. Promoting the use of renewable energy can reduce pollution and also the problems associated with greenhouse gas emissions, greatly. For example, many countries are encouraging the use of electric cars, which can mitigate a considerable amount of emissions from traditional cars. Furthermore, fossil fuel is non-renewable energy, whereas alternative sources such as solar energy are renewable, which means they are a sustainable solution to the global energy problem.
Despite the benefits, there are several issues about alternative energy resources that need to be addressed. The first disadvantage is the high cost of production. This is often the case with solar panels that are quite expensive to produce because making them requires rare and special materials. Moreover, the technology used to store this kind of energy is complicated, and also not cheap. Besides, some energy depends on weather conditions and geographical locations like geothermal energy.
In conclusion, alternative energy sources are unlimited and do not pollute the environment. Nevertheless, there is still work to be done to reduce the cost of manufacturing energy from non-fossil fuels in order to make them a truly viable alternative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, whereas, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58687258687 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05061821972 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7514348225 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422134100089 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130555580971 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904011242643 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239443743985 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616363582333 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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