People are more mobile nowadays. They seldom live in one city all of their lives. Why do you think this is happening? What are the consequences of this trend?
Nowadays, modern people tend to stay temporarily in a place during their responsibility of mobile workload. There are several causes and considerable effects for this phenomenon, which I will elaborate more below.
Regarding the causes, all of jobs require each individual to be highly responsive. This job description might force them to move either one place or many places as one of their responsibilities. To illustrate, businessmen undertake business travelling in an area, where they probably stay for short-time period. Furthermore, because of the activities of millions migrant workers, it is unnecessary for them to own a permanent house. In connection with that, the obligation of accommodations is committed by social corporate, therefore, individuals tend to use such facilities rather than buy a house wasting huge money.
Conversely, this view might show some effects that mobility would cause worse health conditions. Most of individuals could experience not only sleep deprivation but also inadequate nutritional intakes (fast food). To illustrate, researchers hardly get a proper rest, where the weaker body’s immune system can lead to vulnerable serious ailment. Furthermore, busy employees scarcely connect with neighbours, in which to build social interaction seems unreachable considering the idle time. Seemingly, this might put them in trouble when asking for a favour of emergency situations to their surroundings.
In conclusion, the causes of increasing mobility amongst today's society may include the heavy workloads and the company policy of worker's accommodation. Meanwhile, the reasonable effects consider health-related problems as well as poor communication to surroundings.
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also, but, conversely, furthermore, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.864 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30305071109 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.728 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.915366949 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133353466565 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416337976576 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455550067937 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792815536417 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424117133265 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.41 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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