People are never satisfied and always want more.
In what ways is this a good thing and in what ways is this a bad thing.
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your opinion
Changes is the law of nature, with the passage of time many modifications have been occurred. One amongest is that humans have enormous wants and desires, which was mere in pastime. This phenomenon of unlimited wants and desires have both positive and negative points in the form of life interesting and stress factors respectively.This will be demonstrated in the upcoming paragraphs of the thesis with proper examples.
Considering the constructive aspects of more desires ,without these desires the life of an individual is like a flower without fragrance.It is said, “without desires the life is like a body without soul” by a famous poet from India.Therefore, there is no doubt that flactuations in life are very imperative,if the desires of an individual strong ,they able to learn more and they get self-satisfaction by achieving aims and goals in life.So,it can be said that desires lead an individual for efforts and makes the life of an individual colourful and enjoyable.
On the other hand,not to forgotten that exccesive desires have some negative implications.There is no need to saying that this is a major cause of stress in mankind,to achieve their aims and goals, they work hard and round the clock.consequentally,this disturbs the personal and professional life of people,which is proved the fundamental cause beyond the stress by world health organisation.Therefore,mutifarious wants and desires are considered as a negative development.
To conclude,it can be shown that the desires of a human being has been escalating dramatically.Although,this is useful for changes in life but this leads to stress,which has increased considerably around the globe and this is gruesome for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46441947566 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.06364107068 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.309128286 49.4020404114 367% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.166666667 106.682146367 228% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.5 20.7667163134 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0672861882393 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374624937798 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278130190327 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.048580633419 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249261160538 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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