Individual believes that each employees have their own preception from variety types of job. When some workers tend to be loyal to their working place, while the others habitualy move form one to the other jobs. In this essay, I will explain about the positives and the drawbacks for both statements.
Frequently changing job give the vastly opportunity to achieve higher salary in faster way, because a lot of companies use the head hunter agency to find and recruit the potentialy employer to create a movement in the new company. Additionally, individual has chance to learn unusual task in the new company, it also make them relize about the diversity types of job and able to master it in different way. However, to stay and growth in the same company for a long time also profound trust from company and colleague, so you will get the credible position in the division. On the other hand, company also give enormously appreciation for the who devoted in the company, like bonus, salary increases and another gift.
The company will questioning about the credibility of individual who migrate to other company again and again with their own decisions. This will make harder to accepted in the new place when they have bad track record, because all human resource division in every company are connected and the easily ask about your job. Moreover, when clerk stay around in same company and job description will make boredom feeling and most of them resulted stressfull pain.
To sum up, there are several advantages and disadvantages of just stay at the same company or relocate to new company. Also, every individuals needs to deeply think about their path for the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...nusual task in the new company, it also make them relize about the diversity types o...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'question'
Suggestion: question
...s and another gift. The company will questioning about the credibility of individual who...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95422535211 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53040183484 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6909924145 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278136434981 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991085701987 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284865478791 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166088854617 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021469524031 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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