International visitors to New Zealand: transport used during visit

Essay topics:

International visitors to New Zealand: transport used during visit

This bar chart shows about the changes foreign visitor that come to visit New Zeland by different transportation that they used during visit. This accomodation are divided into 5 different things such as car plane coach, train and boad.
As we can see, the most popular one is car. It is almost 70 percent of outcomers try to visit New Zeland. The using of water transportation line boat is least popular comparing to the other vehicle. Foreign visitor only use less than 10 percent of the total usage of boat. This things happen because the population of pople who owned car is the largest.
Train is more popular than boat, visitors use 20 percent train to visit New Zealand. The most similar number of vehicles usage are plane and coach. Those transporatations are least favourite than car but more higher than train usage. Bigger than 30 percent of visitors use plane and coach.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 275, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
... 10 percent of the total usage of boat. This things happen because the population of...
^^^^
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...ations are least favourite than car but more higher than train usage. Bigger than 30 percen...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79738562092 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48137149456 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601307189542 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9014586847 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.7272727273 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45454545455 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3108766668 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112846070373 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129728851655 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216355542252 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459384293326 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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