People living in the 21st century are enjoying a better quality of life compared to people who lived in the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or not?
Technological advances in the 21st centuries have made our lives much easier than before. Many difficulties in the previous centuries have been overcome. However, we have not achieved true peace due to the increasing number of diseases and bad relation among the people.
It is true that technological inventions have made our lives more comfortable. For example, in the past, it took many days for the people to move from one country to another or to send messages to any country. Nowadays. We can send our messages to any country within seconds and reach other countries within few hours. As a result, our communication has developed enormously. Besides, advancement in the medical treatment is a great achievement in this century. In the past, many people used to die from even simple diseases. Nowadays, we have solutions to combat many serious diseases, and consequently, life expectancy has increased significantly.
However, there is a question whether these advancements have resulted in a real peace. Although we can treat many diseases, the number of diseases among the people has increased significantly in this century. Even at the age of 30-35, many people start suffering from heart diseases and blood pressure which were rare among our ancestries. Besides, relation among us has worsened due to the fact that we just focus on earning money and judge others on the basis of wealth and material possessions. However, our relation among our ancestors was much better because of passing a very simple life.
In conclusion, despite the high advancements in technology and medical treatment, we have not gained real peace due to the high number of diseases and poor relation among the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18411552347 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85766924399 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534296028881 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.898688673 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104018359931 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391369183409 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410140855481 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639195761345 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405461531915 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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