Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Many people think that increasing the number of sports facilities is the main solution to boost the health condition of the people. Although this can develop the public health to some extent, this cannot solely give the best result and others measures are needed.
Increasing the number of sports facilities can improve the people’s health in various ways. In many cities, there is a serious lack of sports facilities, like playground and parks, because most of the space is occupied by the modern buildings. So although many people have the desire to play outside to keep themselves fit, it cannot be possible due to lack of sports facilities. If government takes initiative to increase the number of playground, gyms or parks for jogging, health-conscious people will easily be motivated to go there. Besides, it will be even better if that facilities are free for all or charge a minimal fee, and as a result, more people will be encouraged to go there.
However, even if there is a high number of sports facilities, many people might still be discouraged to go there as they will see it as strenuous work. Besides, if people’s food habit is not changed, for example, it foods contain a lot of cholesterol, their health condition will remain unchanged regardless of the exercise. So, government should first make people understand the benefits of going to sports centre and this can be possible by arranging health-related campaigns and programs in the television in which people can get advice regarding how to maintain a healthy lifestyle including the healthy foods necessary for our health. Consequently, more people will be motivated to go to sports centre.
To conclude, increasing the number of sports centre will only give the best result if people are motivated to go be fit and lead a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, however, if, regarding, so, still, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86080592252 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503289473684 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.587690063 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254748376029 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114992260225 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071441705032 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18980748903 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778167021571 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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