Some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as a cell phone) or a service (medical treatment). Do you agree or not?
Many people consider the price of a product or service at first glance to determine whether they can afford it or not. Besides, higher price of a product indicates the higher quality of that product. I totally agree with the view that price is the primary and most important concern for most people.
In the case of consumer goods, low-priced products attract many people. There are many people who cannot afford the products which are costly. Even if they have enough money, they look for the products which have all the features with reasonable prices. For example, many people want the Chinese-branded smartphones instead of premium phones because Chinese manufacturers are known for offering low-priced smartphone with all the features. On the other hand, rich people always look for costly products because these are higher in quality. For example, rich people want iPhones or Samsung mobiles, which are very costly because of the higher quality.
The same views apply in the cases of buying services. Because many people have no ability to afford the premium services, they only want for cheap services. However, the views seem to be changing, and some people want costly services in the hope of better care, especially when it is a matter of medical treatment. For example, the fees of the private and popular hospitals are much higher than the government-funded hospitals which offer only basic services compared to the private hospitals which offer much better care and premium features. So, it is better to rely on premium services in the case of serious necessities.
In conclusion, poor people consider low-priced products and services as they have low earnings. However, in the case of services, we should consider costlier options for better care and facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, look, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1724137931 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5917733199 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479310344828 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7348187946 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240464101295 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883834929619 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642865752797 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171527819608 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746027474903 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.