People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
More and more people in countryside are migrating to large cities to live as the best way to improve their living condition according to their thought. Because of this situation, large cities are facing with many problems, which affects well to citizen’s life. This essay will discuss some detailed issues in this situation and my opinion in the suggestion, which is forcing people to move to regional towns.
One of the most serious problems in large cities is pollution. More people living in cities, which means more transportations used, as the result, the level of air pollution in cities increases significantly. Not only air pollution but also noise and water pollution happens. The second problem in every cities is the level of crime proportion. Crime is less happened in countryside than cities because in religious towns, all residents have approximately equal in property, while there is a huge distance between wealthy and poor families. Therefore, indigent people without educated might become thieves or murders to survive, and affluent people are always worry about possession every day, which is another drawback. Last but not least, huge population in large cities causes the lack of accommodation and so does water supply. The population in developed regions jumped makes the area of lands and fresh water limited, as a result, it is harder than usual to be able to exist.
Due to these problems caused by immigration, the government suggest letting residents move to rural regions. However, I believe that this policy is quite impossible. Despite the disadvantage in large cities, it is undeniable the benefits of urban areas. Developed cities will have better opportunities to get a job to get higher and stable income. Also, children in urban areas have better education than those living in regional towns. Some of students in developing towns have to dropout or learn academic knowledge unfavorably because of having no condition in finance.
In conclusion, although the cities are dealing with numerous problems, the government cannot obligate residents to change living place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the students') or simply say ''Some students''.
Suggestion: Some of the students; Some students
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29761904762 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75701923195 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568452380952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9006482202 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340033868962 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896741983488 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536970124719 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179667652258 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535427206123 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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