People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
In this essay we will find out disadvantages of living in megapolice. As a matter as fact, people living in big cities has too much things to do in a litle amount of time. Although some people keens on spending lifetime in big cities with a lot of benefits.
First of all, I probably have to say that using the public transports is significant thing in our lives. However how much time we spent on it, one hour or even more. For instance, if you decide to get to the Central Park from any stop in Brooklyn it takes at least forty minut of your day. When it comes to the transport may be everyone want move to the towns or villages.
The next problem is how would you get paid. Everyone that living in big cities means that everything is expensive, including accomadation, food, clothes e.g. For example, just for living in a small apartment takes in minimum thousond dollars. In this case only having a good salary helps to life happier.
In my opinion, government probably does not have to impact of people to move litle towns, it would be better if they make a comfortable transportations and solve problems in acommodation, which who does not have enough money government can pay a higher salary.
In conclusion I might to write that every person can choose city or country, where they can be a happy and see the future of life. We could not find a place without any problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., first, however, if, may, so, as to, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53174603175 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55929923956 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2475170742 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8461538462 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177164353865 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524682325652 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450443125095 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890888946718 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467311706914 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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