When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The era we are currently living in is experiencing the ursurge of wide range of buildings both newfangled and not. Some people claim that exterior design is of major importance in any infrastructure while others argue that it is not. I agree that building's appearance is crucial but its importance should not be overstated.
Those people who assume that design should not be prioritized often highlight practical use of buildings. These buildings are erected in order to serve specific functions ranging from storage to meetings. For instance, a garage is a space for keeping transport and its appearance is of no use. It carries out its duty which makes its exterior design redundant. The initial fact to take into account when building anything is its purpose, not design.
Conversely, however, there are some factors that should not overlooked when considering the appearance of a building. Architecturers often create an eye-catching design to attract tourists. There is no point in denying the fact that plethora of tourists nowadays are appealed by the exterior rather than interior look of buildings. They take photos in front of them and haste to post them on social media in order to brag. This results in increasing flow of tourists in particular places and that in its turn makes these places wideknown to the world. For instance, well-known Eiffel Tower welcomes almost 17 million tourists per annum. Therefore, buildings appearance may be of importance in some cases.
All things considered, one may conclude that buildings should be practical. However, sometimes exterior design of infrastructure is important and should not be derogated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in particular, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27924528302 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90374845208 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569811320755 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0754124605 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.2941176471 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221890875765 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695458179777 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490563758939 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131146316387 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038453427532 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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