Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In 21st century, arts and culture are still supported by government. While some people claim that government's budget should not be allocated to arts and culture, others argue that citizens are in advantage from cultural activities. There are strong arguments on both sides of the debate which will be presented in this essay.
There is no point in denying that all countries take pride in their heritage. Arts and culture are two of the most vital components of this sacrosanct heritages. For they are not neglected nor forgotten, government has to provide money to preserve and enhance cultural heritage. Furthemore, arts and culture reflect values, beliefs and customs of the nation. If artists and other creative people do not receive support and incentives, they will not be able to create masterpieces. For instance, a well-known Italian artist Picasso represents Italian culture and art. He invented a wide range of art techniques sthat spread the word about his homeland and art in general.
Conversely, however, nowadays art is becoming notoriously widespread all across the globe. Due to the reason that this sector is lucrative, some people are seeking easy money. They may not be adept at painting or culturally aware, but still create paintings purportedly called art. For example, in 2016, a person named Arwin Minhaj sold his painting of a huge yellow circle for 1 million dollars. This is due to the hype and promotion he had, not because of his outstanding talent or skills. When investing in arts and culture, government should invest appropriately. Second argument in favour of reducing the amount of money allocated on arts and culture is public services. Majority of countries still struggle with literacy, education, health care and policing. That is the reason why government has to concentrate more on improving these mentioned sectors rather than arts and culture. Investing in public facilities and services may improve the overall living standards of a country. Government has to prioritize nation's welfare and only then take into account arts and culture.
Despite the fact that many people are critizing governments for supporting artists, I believe arts and culture play a vital role in people's lives.
In the light of the analysis made above, one may conclude that incentives for investing in arts and culture still prevail.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21842105263 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71629304797 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576315789474 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8100564828 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2173913043 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5217391304 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08695652174 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329418549072 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880562167536 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064132121459 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185144562642 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304392741179 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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