People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this?
As the world is making great strides, the society it creates is also becoming more competitive stress so people in many countries are spending less time with their families.
Young people today face more pressure than ever. As a student, they are under a lot of stress from studying and a worker is under tremendous pressure, they have to work extra time to complete their workload. This explains why they come home late and don't have time for family members. Besides, the advancement of technology has made virtual communication easier than ever. With just a phone in hand, they can easily chat, make phone calls and stay in touch with family members; This makes them less interested in spending time with family.
Firstly, young people who do not spend much time with their family are often vulnerable to the negative impacts of society such as victims, because they have the encouragement and love from their families. The children may be affected by psychological problems. Taking the time to listen to your own problems in the long run can lead to acute anxiety. Plus, long-term anxiety can eventually lead to depression, the so-called silent killer. Therefore, it is worth noting that the findings in Dr. Benes' research from the Journal of Clinical Psychiatry prove the relationship between lack of family interaction and depression. Second, family members who spend less time together can create gaps between children and families. This leads to conflict and unhappy family
In general, there are many easy reasons why people spend less time with their families. However, being aware of the cost of living alone is important, as it can lead to many mental problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 250, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...is explains why they come home late and dont have time for family members. Besides, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, may, second, so, therefore, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03597122302 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52326271277 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4894791871 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41881178608 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132277901496 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145356989032 0.0667982634062 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280510105176 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496105493491 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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