People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this ?
Nowadays, more people in many countries have increasingly less family together time. This essay will discuss some reasons for this phenomenon and the impact of this trend.
To begin with, there are some reasons for the absence of family time. First and foremost, people are busier with a host of work, so having a cramped schedule results in reduced family time. In fact, a majority of children and adults are overwhelmed by much more works and deadlines, which is hard to arrange time for other family members. Another rationale is that technology is being overused with the development of social media such as Facebook, Twitter ,... It is due to the fact that we have an ability to get in touch with friends here and there, spending time with other relationships means lack of quality family time. Take an example of adolescences in some cities of developed countries, more and more teenagers are addicted to online games and social platforms for youth like TikTok or Facebook. They surf the internet and play games with their virtual partners all day long and prefer talking to friends rather than family.
With this circumstances, there are many negative impact on people's relationships. One of the major effect is the increasing gap between family members leads to the deterioration of family relations, even divorcing. If they do not get on well with their parents or children, some relationships will prone to be lost in the future. A second impact is that the absence of family bond results in a huge number of social issues. For instance, when parents spend less time with their offspring, they are more vulnerable to bad consequences from friends and the mass media. It is the fundamental cause of the rise of violence and crime rate in big cities at present. If they are taken care and educated correctly, more people can help improving their countries as well as our world.
To sum up, there are many reasons of sharing less time with family and this phenomenon has a large quantity of bad influences on modern families as well as modern society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f social media such as Facebook, Twitter ,... It is due to the fact that we have a...
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Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...to friends rather than family. With this circumstances, there are many negative ...
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Line 5, column 730, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to improve' or 'improve'.
Suggestion: to improve; improve
...ducated correctly, more people can help improving their countries as well as our world. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, well, for instance, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90028490028 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59648522761 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54415954416 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2188665741 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.176470588 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458728400422 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141675740424 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099219008231 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306866667467 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456348466113 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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