People naturally resist making changes in their lives.
What kinds of problems can this cause?
What solutions can you suggest?
People by nature tend to avoid new experiences and changes in life. This essay will first discuss that the primary issue this may cause is the fact that people would have fewer chances of improvement and success. Secondly, propose that launching an awareness campaign to educate people about the benefits they may reap from making changes in their lives may encourage them to make radical decisions.
Humans have a penchant to fear and anxiety and this may hinder them from becoming successful in their lives. Take for instance an ordinary employee in an organization that would always make concerting efforts just to ensure his position, rather than even thinking of setting his or her own business. Bill Gates, as a prime example, used to a simple employee in a large IT organization and he would not have become the successful person we know today without making a radical change in his life, which was setting his own business.
In order to address the root cause of this issue, launching an awareness campaign through the media to educate people about the importance of taking decisive changes in their lives is considered to be an ideal solution. Publishing success stories of other people who challenged their fears and changed their destiny will give a shot in the arm to people who are reluctant to change the trajectory of their lives. For example, a study that was conducted by the University of Singapore showed that after a similar initiative, the number of people who took risks and started their private businesses more than doubled.
In conclusion, the major issue people may suffer due to being afraid of making changes in their lives is having fewer opportunities to stand out. However, spreading consciousness is considered a viable solution to encourage people to make a step forward and change their situations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... used to a simple employee in a large IT organization and he would not have becom...
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...ep forward and change their situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02614379085 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61211503274 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542483660131 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6433027562 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.818181818 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232638998948 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102505653383 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477152232594 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155493127838 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501617810382 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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