Nowadays, people tend to do less active activities in their spare time. They usually prefer lying on the bed and watching film or scrolling on social media than going outside or playing sports. There are several reasons for that.
First of all, technology has been developed more and more and has became a part of our life. In the past, there was no technology, TV or smartphone. Therefore, people usually spend their leisure time actively. They like hanging out with friends, playing sports, going library to read books or even shopping. The appearance of technology products has made our life more convenient. People are able to read book, chat with others, entertain or buy anything with their smartphones. They just sitting at home but they can do everything they want.
Moreover, after a hard- working day, people want to stay their home to relax. It is really comfortable that we can lie on the sofa, watch TV and do nothing. Generally, people have to work eight hours a day, six days a week so they spend the most time outside. When they have spare time, they just want to enjoy this moment at home.
Aditionally, active activities takes a lot of time. If a person want to go out, she have to prepare clothes, make up and something like that. Besides, people will face with trafic jam or bad weather that make they feel annoyed and tired. Instead, people tend to relax with their smartphone or laptop all day at home.
In sort, people spend their spare time less actively than they did in the past because of the changing of life. However, it will be better if people spend more time for outside activities.
- School should not force children to learn a foreign language To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- People nowadays spend their free time less actively than in the past Do you agree or disagree 64
- Online education is becoming more and more popular Some people claim that e learning has so many benefit that it will replace face to face education Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable Discuss both view and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...as been developed more and more and has became a part of our life. In the past, there ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...library to read books or even shopping. The appearance of technology products ha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... want to stay their home to relax. It is really comfortable that we can lie on th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nothing. Generally, people have to work eight hours a day, six days a week so th...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...f time. If a person want to go out, she have to prepare clothes, make up and somethi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68070175439 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34454239452 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585964912281 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.775646801 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.7 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284423781856 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964687734889 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114576832558 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195659505795 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951321369721 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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