People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
The age people have children varies with the development of the society. Therefore, the recent number of adults having children late in life is surveyed to rise dramatically. From my perspective, this phenomenon might result in both merits and demerits to people, which will be shed light on in this essay.
On the positive side, adults, especiallyadults (especially those who are under the age of 27) 30s might be more ready to be parents by the fact that they obtain more maturity and responsibility through experiences. The more mature parents are, the better parenting skills. Having children at older ages can be advantageous in a sense that parents may adopt a stable financial and income status. It can be explained that they have such abundant finance that they are able to maintain a family as well as bring a child up without tearing their hair out due to financial issues. Consequently, family is their first priority.
However, having children late can have detrimental influences on not only the baby, but also the mother. For example, According to a survey conducted by Oxford university, the increasing rate of facing Down syndrome in children is relevant to their mother’s age when giving birth. Moreover, children will have a growing tendency to have lower birth weight. Having children at old ages also can take a toll on the economy of the nation because of the decrease in the labourin labour force, led by the aging population.
In conclusion, having children late in life not only can be a great help but it can also do people a disservice
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95094339623 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77955716909 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588679245283 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3347459684 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.923076923 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273264216867 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104804956613 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083826084348 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16415915926 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494478755093 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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