People nowadays tend to take their family to another country when they work abroad. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, the proportion of migration with the target of finding opportunities to take their career forward is quickly rising. The majority of those who go to work overseas tend to take their family with them, which I believe is along with more drawbacks than benefits. In my upcoming paragraphs, I will provide evidence to support my position.
Regarding going abroad is beneficial, there is no doubt that moving to developed foreign countries will be a life-changing key for people’s families. In detail, the standard of life improves considerably when the spouse has a chance to work in a high-quality workplace with a high-paying wage as their children can gain a better education and environment to develop. Moreover, the governments, for instance in certain Western nations, will launch the appropriate policies to safeguard and guarantee the migrants’ rights as they easily integrate into the new community and don’t need to be like a cat on hot bricks due to inadequate security.
However, firstly, the migrants’ life abroad, especially in some high-cost places, can only be covered and have full payment such as taxes, education, and other living costs if the spouse can find and employ solid work. On the contrary, in case of not guaranteeing, the low and average pay in these countries is possibly accompanied by the poorer standard of living and security, the lower quality of services, especially health services which results in a higher chance of having the illness. Second, language and culture shock are the most significant difficulties for all members when it takes a long time to become a part of a new community. Migrants must conquer it or risk isolating themselves and developing mental health issues.
To put it in a nutshell, we can say that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages so humanity should have to make decisions accordingly depending on their circumstances.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, no doubt, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07716049383 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97870528673 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614197530864 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8725590197 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.545454545 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221399646698 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705433212596 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458551385913 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120904608414 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022631437574 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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