Shopping is a widely popular and enjoyable activity in society. It is commonly believed that purchasing majorly relies on the age number as compared to other aspects. This essay will argue why purchasing power and one's mood contributes equally.
To commence with, age is an imperative contributor in developing shopping habits. This is because, with the increasing age, people want to save more in order to secure their future and tend to spend less on shopping for pleasure; whereas, adults are more attracted to buying things for themselves. Moreover, the age difference leads to change in mentality and consequently affects the shopping preferences. To corroborate, elders in a family prefer to buy necessary items, such as groceries, home decor products, electronic appliances, which are important for living a life; however, young minds prefer to buy products they are fond of and achieve contentment. Therefore, the age factor definitely plays an eminent role in shopping.
On the other hand, the shopping habits highly depend on the purchasing power of an individual. Capacity to buy comes with the flow of income. If the salary is high, anything can be bought by an individual without giving a second thought, but if the salary is low, it is a herculean task to even afford the basic necessity. Hence, the question of habit in case of poverty does not apply. In addition, nowadays, shopping is considered as a retail therapy for most people irrespective of their age. For instance, a survey conducted in 2015 demonstrated that almost 70% of individuals prefer to do online or in-person shopping when they feel sad or demotivated. Hence, the more the income, the more the people do shopping.
In Conclusion, I would like to reiterate that buying does not thoroughly depend on the age factor, the capacity to buy and an individual's mood also contribute equally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12052117264 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87824416763 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589576547231 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4358569699 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249588649845 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806096338365 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590549163475 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135163713305 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583305683087 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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