Individuals have always existed and are thrilled to read or watch unknown crime novels and TV crime dramas. At present, in most nations, the series and books about crime have gained significant popularity. This is majorly because the shows provide guaranteed delivery of justice and based on true events. In my opinion, this is definitely a negative phenomenon.
To begin with, these shows are directed and written in a way which ultimately leads to justice. In other words, the innocent will eventually be served with fairness irrespective of numerous false allegations. This attributes in a sense of fulfillment among the audience, which is not the case in real life. In addition, criminal movies attract a large number of people because they are mostly based on true events. Not only this but also the directors cast the most popular actors. Hence, humans feel connected and related to the story as if it is their own life. I believe these two are the predominant reasons for the upsurge popularity of criminal dramas.
In my perspective, if this trend persists, it will have disastrous consequences on human beings. Firstly, these shows not only set the mind in the wrong direction but also make individuals more violent. To corroborate, 42% of youngsters, as per crime branch report, were engaged in robbery,drugs and rape cases only after getting influenced by the offensive shows on the digital platforms. Therefore, wrong narratives target a selected audience which easily get affected and reiterate the same actions in their real life. Next, watching TV crime dramas, in front of the whole family is not appropriate as it involves offensive content, such as nudity, sex, violence, murder and robbery.
In conclusion, undoubtedly, the reality and justice of the criminal shows have started attracting a large number of individuals, however, it is not an appropriate trend as it influences people to follow the inappropriate practices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , drugs
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22292993631 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87422808184 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3624172406 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4705882353 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198027846696 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546077457411 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696340968104 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110224007376 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829144859293 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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