Cosmetic surgery is becoming popular amongst the society and majority of people are following this trend in order to enhance their look. This is majorly because of increasing competition in the entertainment industry. I firmly believe that this is overall a negative development and shall discuss my views in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, due to cut-throat competition, people often change their physical appearance with the help of plastic surgeries. It enhances their confidence and gives them better opportunities for a successful career. For instance, almost celebrities take help of dermatologists to sharpen their features in order to look appealing and attractive. Although it involves huge risk, it gives flawless beauty. In addition, actresses who wants to acquire more movies, take help of painful surgeries. They want to look drop dead gorgeous in comparison to others and increase the number of movies. Therefore, these two are the leading factors why people change their appearance.
There are myraid reasons associayed with negative growth. Firstly, it decreases the quality of skin and makes it vulnarable to outer environment. In other words, people who go through with surgeries, are not allowed to expose out in the sun and intake several foods as they become allergic. Secondly, changing natural features will initially make you look beautiful, however, have disasterous impacts on the overall health in the long run. To emplify, Michael Jackson a famous dancer died due to skin cancer which was a result of almost 50 facial surgeries. Hence, it is significanky clear that it is a negative development.
To summarize, although skin surgeries give good features and fame, it is not always good and has deterimental affects on the health which sometime causes death. Personally, i believe people should admire natural beauty and promote self love.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39661016949 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85801111279 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630508474576 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2840925143 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4444444444 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227377032899 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604565652633 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555420875405 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119304828453 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535813118491 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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