It is said by few that the extinction of specific species of flora and fauna is the major problem of our time while others think that there are so many other environmental problems than the reducing numbers of animals and plants that just can not be forgotten. I personally believe that the loss of some species of plants and animals is becoming a huge problem but other problems that are around us all the time should not be ignored at any cost.
The disappearance of certain endangered species is on the rise which has become an alarming situation for the environment, which should be resolved as some as possible because the beauty of the nature is all in the hands of them. Without them, there would not be any eye catching jungles or zoos. For example, tigers were on the edge of extinction in around 2010 because of the unwanted haunting done by the people living in tribes which was not restricted by the laws at that time. So, from that unhappening the government learnt a lesson that the killing of endangered species without any permission must not be allowed. In the present, the number of tigers in india has become stable and things could have been worse if they were not handled with care. But that does not mean that this is the only environmental problem.
There are uncountable problems in the environment which some believe that they need to be given some attention as well. Alarming situations such as global warming and inhabitual weather conditions in some areas are some environmental problems. Global warming is affecting almost every part of the world, which is the cause of the deaths of millions of people. The main root cause of this issue is deforestation. The amount of trees being cut down daily should be controlled or some policies should be implimented by the government in order to stop this epidemic. Unlivable conditions caused by the cllimate of certain countries such as canada and africa which is forcing the people to migrate to other countries. Some precautions can be taken to help people in these areas to survive and live their lives happily.
As far as I am concerned , I agree with both of the views because either of them must not be ignored in any way and both of them are equally important. If we give more attention to one thought rather than the other one, it would be a problematic situation for us and it could cause conflicts between people.
To conclude, Environment is facing a lot of problems which are caused by human beings and we must focus on all of them equally not partially as it contributes to the betterment of our surronding.
- There are many ways to find a job newspaper advertisements Internet job search Web sites and personal recommendations What do you think is the best way to find a job Why Give reasons or examples to support your opinion 56
- Many employees may work at home with the modern technology Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers not the employers Do you agree or disagree 56
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
- People s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors Do you agree or disagree 67
- It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ves happily. As far as I am concerned , I agree with both of the views because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 13.1623246493 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 456.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71052631579 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61947628907 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482456140351 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.5020768029 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94444444444 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238388230505 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761473107441 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743977695604 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137798311156 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953192354532 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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