people should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, many people believe that when they go to other countries, they have to obey the traditions and the rules in that country. I am really convinced with this statement and in this essay I will prove it with some reasons.
One of the main reason for this issue is that people show their respect to the foreign country. A typical example is that, when you see people destroy the public materials or do not have a cognitive about the heritage, you have to protect it like you protect yourself, this action is a kind of a respect. What I mean by this is that, if you have an esteem for the foreign country, they will response you in the same way.
Another reason for this statement is that foreginers can have new experiences in the new country. Clearly, foreginers interact with many people in the new country, they can experience many things such as lifestyle, customs and they will have a huge knowledges about the second country they live. Foreginers will have many benefits if they adopt the customs in their new environment and making friends easily, which is one of those benefits.
Masses are completely against such a subjective point of view. The reason for this case is that they believe when they do not adapt the traditions in their new country, they will have a freedom and they can be theirselves. Moreover, People think they will different with others.
In conclusion, although it might seem not sensible for foreginers to disobey the customs of their new country. In my perspective, people need to consider their new country similar to their original country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'knowledge'?
Suggestion: knowledge
...tyle, customs and they will have a huge knowledges about the second country they live. For...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, second, so, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76363636364 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51001300579 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469090909091 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7726670635 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24741212559 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101598498988 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515302055414 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151006929913 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321456802129 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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