People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
many people argue that foreigners should observe the local customs and traditions
when they come to reside in a new country. I completely agree with this view.
there are important reasons why people should follow the customs when they
settle in a foreign country. Firstly, if newcomers behave according to the local
norms, the resident population will accept them much more readily, they will make
friends more easily and they will earn respect. For example, an entrepreneur who
comes to live in a new country and starts up a business must be aware of the
business practices of that country. there are bound to be many pitfalls, not only
legal ones but also simply in terms of winning and keeping customers by observing
the local way of doing business. Secondly, recent immigrants are likely to be
shunned if they upset local sensibilities. In Singapore, for instance, residents will
consider them dirty and ill-mannered if they litter the street or spit gum in public
places.
In their adopted homeland, newcomers should also adopt the traditions which local
people observe. The principal benefit is the richness of the experience which new
residents will gain from enjoying aspects of local traditions, enabling them to
participate in community life and avoid social isolation. During festivals and
national holidays, especially, they will feel like they ‘belong’ in their new country.
For example, Chinese people in the UK not only celebrate Chinese new year, but
they often attend the local new year celebrations and fireworks in London and
other major cities.
In conclusion, I would certainly argue that people who settle in a new country
should follow local customs and embrace the traditions which local people
observe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51957295374 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71748208953 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7408444617 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.307692308 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277613202313 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111603865213 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112416018619 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869812064024 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912158873775 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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